Author vs. AI: Should you use Ai to write?

Author vs. AI: Should you use Ai to write?

What two words are most likely to occur next in this blog post?

Crap. Quality.

Did you guess those words? A generative AI model, specifically a Large Language Model (LLM), would have tried to guess them if prompted to do so. The model might have succeeded in providing crap, though quality is a different story…

So, what about LLMs and your writing? Should you use an LLM to help you write your post, article, story, or book? Or maybe just for editing, because the concepts would still be your own, and what’s the difference between an AI editor and a human editor, right??

The decision is ultimately yours to make, and the world won’t end either way (at least not by AI’s capabilities alone), but before you decide, just remember that all LLMs can do is predict the most likely word to occur next in a sequence.

If you let AI write or co-write a scene or passage in your novel, you will get action and dialogue made of most-likely words, given the context. If you use it to edit a paragraph in your essay or short story, a sentence, even a word, you will see alterations of your unique ideas and visions driven by algorithmic word prediction.

In other words, if you use LLMs in any capacity during your writing, beyond proofreading for basic errors, you will be ensuring that your work amounts to a mashup of the “most likely” words to occur in a grammatical sequence. Sure, the writing will be coherent (mostly), logical, and rhythmic at first glance, but…

Will it achieve what good writing is supposed to achieve?

Let’s consider fiction novels for a moment. Horror books are expected to “scare.” Will the most likely words to occur do that for the reader? Thriller books are expected to “thrill.” Will the most likely words to occur do that for the reader? Can a most-likely word charm, romance, or titillate someone? Can the most likely words to occur form an epic literary narrative that astounds, inspires, or confounds?

Surprising. Engaging. Thought-provoking. Mystifying. These are the qualities that good books and good writing should possess to keep readers curious, hungry, fulfilled, and still coming back for more.

Can the most likely words to occur achieve those things? Really? If you presented this very question to an LLM for a one-word answer, I think you know what the most likely word would be…

Daily word counts & the fog of writing

Daily word counts & the fog of writing

I have finally reached some regularity with writing. Six days a week. Around 800 words a day. Sometimes more; sometimes less.

I’m always curious about other writers’ schedules, so I thought I’d put that out there.

The first draft of my next novel is now at 25k words. It’s satisfying to make progress, fun to experiment with character and scene and plot, but there are still a lot of unknowns and potentials at this point in the process.

Those unknowns can be thrilling but also unnerving –– and for some writers, terrifying. Luckily, I’ve pretty much stayed ahead of the anxiety and self-doubt this time, but I know I haven’t lost that monster completely.

It’s still on my scent trail, nose dripping, mouth frothing. But the longer it stays at my back, the more confident I am that I’ll bag its ass if it ever reaches me.

That wasn’t always the case. Doubt and anxiety overwhelmed me and scared me from writing many times. But now, I’ve learned how to not think too much beyond the next few steps.

Writing, like many difficult and precarious endeavors, is a network of foggy passages. Try to see too far ahead, into the soupy murk, and you feel lost and hopeless.

But if you bring your attention closer to the task at hand–––the next chapter, scene, paragraph, sentence––you’ll find there is solid ground before you, enough clarity for another couple of steps.

With each run through, or draft, the fog clears a little for you to choose the right passages and seal up the wrong ones. And by the sixth, seventh, or twentieth draft, it will be totally clear.

That clarity will still reveal rough patches and inconsistencies in what you’ve kept, but they will be visible. Focus on them and fix them as best you can.

Will it be perfect? No. But it will be a real story. And probably one worth reading.

There’s always more to learn in writing. Gotta keep at it…